AO Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies with developing confidence to identify, form, and express ideas
I am learning to include visual information in my writing including images, graphs and charts.
I am learning to revise and rework my writing for clarity, impact and purpose.
I am learning to support my main ideas with important details.
Allie the Ladybug
Allie: Hi my name Is Allie and I’m a ladybug, I can see some people across the field, I think they are having a picnic. All that means is I can have some food, YUMMY! I’d better go over there before they eat It all.
Reader: 15 minutes later Allie was there.
Allie: Finally I'm here what should I eat now?, ah ha I’m going to go In to the picnic basket. YUMMY there are strawberries.
Reader: They were so good that Allie got carried away and the humans were unpacking all the food and when Allie found out she thought it was the end of the world.
Allie: ahh what's happening.
Reader: She was screaming that loud that all her friends came over. Good thing the spider did because they had to have someone to scare the humans away. When the spider scared the humans away they took Allie to her home.
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