Hi, Libbie. Your blog post is awesome! You have done a superb job on you’re writing. When I was younger I would always end up finding the most eggs out of my cousins in the scavenger hunts. There are a few spelling mistakes so watch for those. How many eggs did you find on the hunt?
Kia Ora my name is Elly and I am a year six student from Paparore School. Ever since I was very little I have always enjoyed Easter egg hunts. I really enjoyed reading you writing and I love how you explained the steps you did through out the hunt. How many eggs did you have in the end?
Hello, Libbie my name is June I love your story. It is wonderful but you should add some elaboration to your story. You have some great sentence starters. Have you thought about adding a WALT to your post, so people know what the post is about?
Awesome libbie i remember that. It was funny to watch (DAD)
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ReplyDeleteHi, Libbie. Your blog post is awesome! You have done a superb job on you’re writing. When I was younger I would always end up finding the most eggs out of my cousins in the scavenger hunts. There are a few spelling mistakes so watch for those. How many eggs did you find on the hunt?
ReplyDeleteHi Libbie I really like your post. I've done a Easter egg hunt before too. Maybe you should reread it and check if it makes sense. Did you enjoy it?
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora my name is Elly and I am a year six student from Paparore School. Ever since I was very little I have always enjoyed Easter egg hunts. I really enjoyed reading you writing and I love how you explained the steps you did through out the hunt. How many eggs did you have in the end?
ReplyDeleteHello, Libbie my name is June I love your story. It is wonderful but you should add some elaboration to your story. You have some great sentence starters. Have you thought about adding a WALT to your post, so people know what the post is about?
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